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Correct my English please? Topic: Writing skills exercises in english
July 23, 2019 / By Della
Question: I need to write a short note about my interests and hobbies and skills. I need because I am applying for job in school. I appreciate any help! "I like reading a lot. I generally read inspirational and motivational books.Reading relaxing me and taking me to an entirely different world of imagination. It helps me to be more creative in my thinking and imaginative. I am totally mad about fitness. I am gym member. I like to be fit and healthy. I would be happy to be involved in any sports or healthy food project. I am also a big fan of traveling. I love discover a new places in Great Britain and in the world. With my friends we always trying to find something interesting to visit. I like places when you can spend a nice time but which also have a touch of history. I like to organizing everything by myself where to go, what to visit, check if there is any vouchers available for example 2 for 1 etc."
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Bunty Bunty | 9 days ago
Not my best work but, try this out; I enjoy reading; I find that it both relaxes me and takes me into a world of imagination. Generally, I read inspirational and motivational books. Reading helps me to be more creative and imaginative in my own thinking. Health and fitness are important issues for me, and as such, I have a gym membership to help me to achieve and maintain my health and fitness goals. Participating in sports is another way that I maintain my healthy lifestyle choices and allows me to become more socially active with my peers. I believe that healthy eating habits are as important to good health as exercise and enjoy learning about creating a diet that is not only healthy but tastes good too. Lastly, I enjoy traveling and to discover new places both in Great Britain, and around the world. In seeking new places to visit, I search for places that have a touch of history to them. I prefer to organize these trips myself to better learn about the location and the people there rather than just relying on what some travel brochure tells me is important, it allows me to get a better feel for the location and its peoples.
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Bunty Originally Answered: Hello to all American English Speaking people. Please correct my English Grammar:)?
My Passion for English I have invested in learning the English Language since I started my goal to be proficient at it, many years ago. Even though it is very difficult to master, I somehow never gave up. I have been to school for months, but was not able to finish. There are so many methods for me to learn English, but none of it really works out well. What really motivates me to pursue learning is my determination despite how many things are being bombarded at me to speed up my improvement. As soon as my determination established, I started to do something fun in relation to my learning. I would watch movies, TV shows and even listening to FM radio shows on my portable radio in English while traveling. I put in effort to make things easier by making it more interesting. I may not be as smart as others, but I know my limits. There are a lot of different ways to correct things because it is according to the person doing the revision, but I hope you're satisfied with how I revised it. :) Good luck with learning English! You seem pretty good at it already.

Allison Allison
I like reading inspirational and motivational books.Reading relaxes me and takes me to an entirely different world of imagination. It helps me to be more creative in my thinking and imaginative. I am totally mad about fitness. I am a gym member because I like to stay fit and healthy. I would be happy to be involved in any sports or healthy food project. I am also a big fan of traveling. I love discovering new places in Great Britain and in the world. With my friends, we always try to find something interesting to visit. I like places where you can spend nice time and have a touch of history. I like organizing everything by myself such as where to go, what to visit, check if there is any vouchers available for example 2 for 1 etc."
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Uzia Uzia
OK "I like reading a lot. I generally read inspirational and motivational books.Reading relaxes me and takes me to an entirely different world of imagination. Reading helps me to be more creative in my thinking and imaginative. I am totally mad about fitness. I am gym member BeacuaseI like to be fit and healthy. I would be happy to be involved in any sports or healthy food project. I am also a big fan of traveling. I love discover a new places in Great Britain and in the rest of world. With my friends we always try to find something interesting to visit. I like places when you can spend a nice time but which also have a touch of history. I like to organizing everything by myself where to go, what to visit, check if there is any vouchers available for example 2 for 1 etc."
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Roger Roger
" i like to read a lot, i generally read inspirational and motivational books. Reading helps me relax, it takes me to an entirely different world of my imagination. It helps me be more creative, and and think creatively and to be imaginative.Another thing I absolutely love is to be fit, i am a gym member, i just love the feeling of being fit and healthy. I would be happy to be involved in any sports or healthy foods project. Another love of mine is traveling, i would love to discover new places in Great Britain and in the world, me and my friends always try to find interesting places to visit. I like places where you can have a nice time but that also makes you learn about a history and has a history. I am very independent, i like organizing everything by myself, this includes but it's not limited to where i want to go, what i want to visit, check if there is any brochures available for example 2 for one etc."
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Miki Miki
"I like reading a lot. I generally read inspirational and motivational books.Reading relaxing me and taking me in a totally different imaginary world. It helps me to think in more creative and imaginary way. I am totally mad about fitness. I am gym member. I like to be fit and healthy. I would be happy to be involved in any sports or healthy food project. I am also a big fan of traveling. I love to discover NEW PLACES (not 'a new places that it's for singolar use) new places in Great Britain and in the world. With my friends we always trying to find something interesting to visit. I like places wheRE you can spend good time but that also have a touch of history. I like to organizing everything by myself where to go, what to visit, check if there is any vouchers available for example 2 for 1 etc."
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Junior Junior
"I like reading a lot. I generally read inspirational and motivational books. Reading relaxes me and takes me to an entirely different world of imagination. It helps me to be more imaginative and creative in my thinking. I am totally mad about fitness. I am a gym member. I like to be fit and healthy. I would be happy to be involved in any sports or health food project. I am also a big fan of traveling. I love to discover new places in Great Britain and in the world. I am always trying to find somewhere interesting to visit with my friends. I like places where you can have a nice time but which also have a touch of history. I like to organize everything by myself; where to go, what to visit, check if there is any vouchers available, for example 2 for 1, etc." good luck!
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Harrison Harrison
i have corrected your note- "I like reading a lot. I generally read inspirational and motivational books.Reading relaxes me and it takes me to an entirely different world of imagination. It helps me to be more creative and imaginative. I am totally a fitness freak. I am gym member. I like to be fit and healthy. I am always happy to be involved in any sports or healthy food project. I also love traveling. I like to know about new places in the world. me and my friends are always try to visit interesting new places. I like historical places where you can spend a nice time .I like to organizing everything by myself! I HAVE CUT SOME OF YOUR SENTENCES AS I FEEL THERE IS NO NEED FOR THEM TO BE WRITTEN IN YOUR NOTE.
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Eldridge Eldridge
..... reading RELAXES me and TAKES me.... ......more creative in THINKING and IMAGINATION ı am A gym member. i like being fit .... we always TRY to.... SOMEWHERE interestin... ı like ORGANIZING.... note: be careful about infinitives and gerunds your mistakes mostly based on these
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Eldridge Originally Answered: Would you please correct my English?
December 27, 2009 I finished reading the book "Daddy-Long-Legs" yesterday. To say in short, this book is about an unfortunate orphan who lives in an orphanage has found her desire to write supported by a member of the trustees of the home. She goes on to college with the financial backing of the unknown trustee under the condition that she writes a letter to him once a month. All she knew about him was the vague shape of his silhouette from behind and that he had long legs. She doesn't know who he is or even his real name. In college she is able to enrich knowledge and her growth as a person in spite of her meager beginnings as an orphan. She studies to become a writer and she continues to send her benefactor letters which are written about her daily life. She becomes to think of him as an old family member. One day she becomes acquainted with a nice man and fell in love with him. He proposes to her but she could not accept because she is ashamed and afraid of revealing her past as an orphan. All these events end up in her letters to her sponsor. Finally, she finishes her four years of college life and meets her benefactor Daddy Long Legs for the first time. She then discovers he was the same man she fell in love with. He had known all along about her humble beginnings and loved her just the same.

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