How is this poem i wrote?
Topic: How to write a mystery poem
June 17, 2019 / By Shelena Question:
i ask this question every once in a while so i know if its good enough to put in my "thousand miles" poem book thingy. so please check it and see if its any good.
Your fascination intrigues me
you're so inviting with your charm
your essence is a mystery
your presence is of no alarm
your intentions seem so innocent
until i gaze within the cover
you seem strange yet similar
to the face or trace of another
your playful nature teases me
with a desire to explore
resisting the logic of thinking
I burn for something more
enchanted by no explanation,
easily seduced...you will not surrender
because we are so much alike
we seek to know the answers
your eyes put up a fight
tempted to know the secrets on your lips
I look you in the eye I now understand...this is not goodbye.
It was our destiny to cross each others paths.
please and thank you. (=
Best Answers: How is this poem i wrote?
Paulina | 5 days ago
Well i like it because it has alot of feelings to it and its very sweet and a heart warming poem =) i give a 10 of a 10 i love it :D
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Awesome poem, love what this is saying but all the "yours" in the start are somewhat distracting, try using different words to describe the feeling.
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i think it nice. but there is something missing don't know what but it still needs more to get the right feeling about your poem.
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Sorry man.... but that is the worst poem eva.... but... my cuzin likes it and thinks it is so awesome. So keep it up and be cool man, be cool. So...yeah revise it and make it more interesting.... please. you bore me to tears
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Originally Answered: Do you like this poem I wrote?
Yes, I like it some, but if it were rewriten and polished and made to really shine, I bet I'd like it a lot more. Hope this helps. Thanks for letting me read it.