Okay I got a essay and i don't get how to do it?
Topic: Write about your future essay
June 20, 2019 / By Annis Question:
i don't know what to write about
the subject is about my like
the first paragraph i have is supose to be bout my name and myself what am i supose to write
the second is family
third home life
fourth is experience i don't relly get this one
the last is future
can anyone help me with my outline?
Best Answers: Okay I got a essay and i don't get how to do it?
Yahveh | 3 days ago
first para: write all about yourself, eg. name, d.o.b, likes dislikes, etc etc.
sec para: write about your family, eg. parents, siblings, heritage, etc.
thrd para: write about what sort of life you have at home eg. laid back, busy, very family oriented, etc.
fourth para: write about things you have experienced that helped you learn something either about yourself, others, or any other mattter. experiences can include like, travelling to different countries, trying new hobbies, whatever you like.
last para: write what you think is going to happen in your future, what you hope/want to happen, careers, starting a family, basically what path your going to take.
idk if this will help but its what i'd write lol.
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Originally Answered: U.S History Essay. The Cold War was mainly the U.S.’fault. I need some thesis ideas, to write my five paragraph essay?
1) As soon as the UN was formed after WWII the Americans offered to place nuclear weapons under the control of their newly formed UN if the rest of the world didn't try to create their own nuclear weapons. The Russians refused because the UN was created by the US and held undue influence in the organization, they simply didn't trust us. The Russians would only accept a total disarmament which the Americans wouldn't accept because Russia's conventional military force was enormous and already on the ground in Europe. We needed the A-bombs to keep Stalin at bay without them we would have had to keep a large conventional war weary force in Europe after WWII. So we took the easy route told the Russians to get stuffed and kept our nukes.
2) As the Cold War progressed the US LIED about the Russian's actual combat capabilities in order to justify our enormous military build up.
3) The US started the Cuban missile crisis by stationing nuclear missiles on the USSR's doorstep in Turkey the Russians were only trying to keep up with the US nuclear posturing. After the failed US backed "Bay of Pigs" invasion the Cubans asked the Russians to station nuclear missiles in Cuba to deter future US aggression. The Russians finally agreed when the US put nuclear missiles in Turkey and Italy well within range of Moscow.
Note: during the Cuban missile crisis a Russian sub commander saved the world by NOT returning fire with a nuclear torpedo after an American depth charge attack. In addition after the crisis the US quietly removed our missiles from Turkey and Italy that is how close our nuclear brinkmanship brought the world to WWIII.
well... for the first paragraph, maybe try and find the history of your name. such as "micheal" might have a relationship to "michealangelo" or something. for the next part, just write things about you. likes/dislikes, heritage, things people might not know.
second: put your families background. if youre jewish, put history of your family being in the holocaust. and include your immediate family and things about them.
third: describe basically your home life. describe your house, why you live in the area you do (rural, city, etc) how your life is lived in your house.
fourth: experience in anything. job, volunteer work, maybe playing an instrument?, sports, etc.
future: what you expect out of your future, what you want to have as a professional career, family, college, kids, etc
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on babynames.com, find out what your name means. From your parents find y they gave you this name. write about your like and dislikes. heritage
second write about your family, whos in it, what are they like what do you do with them.
where you came from your culture
home life what kind of stuff do you do at home what do you do after school what kind of a house and area you live in
i dont really get the fourth 1 either but if i had to guess what kind of things youve experienced in life? for example moving or something
and the future write about what you see yourself as in the future
like what college you will go to what your job will be if youll have a family..
this kind of stuff
hope i helped! :-)
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Family - Well, your family, who's in your family, what your family does, family things.
Home life- who you live who, what you do at home, etc.
Experience - What you've done, what you've experienced, life things.
Future - What you want to be in the future, career, etc.
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Originally Answered: Is this essay good? Plz give me some comments,some improvements and the IELTS band score for this essay?
> SHOULD FOOD MANUFACTURERS BE FORCE
Wrong verb form: it should be 'forced'.
> Nowadays, junk food is gradually becoming a specific part of daily life
I think it was always 'specific'. A more to the point word like 'important', 'basic' or 'constant' is better for the essay purpose.
> Eating much of these foods causes obesity and premature death; especially foods with high fat
Two uses of 'foods' very close to each other. I suggest replacing one of them by a pronoun.
> In this essay, I intend to show that food manufacturers need to be forced to ...
IMO, a good essay should speak for itself, so the 28 words you use to close the paragraph could be replaced by something more original.
> what is good for their body.
'...their bodies', actually :) For those cases, if unsure, use adjectives, for example: 'what is good on a corporal level'.
> why should the food manufacturers be forced to lower the fat, sugar and salt?
You're recycling too much IMO.
> The government does not need to make the decision...
Unless somebody said the government 'needs' to make that decision, there's no reason for you to state that (i.e. you don't need it, funnily enough). I think something like 'isn't supposed to make the decision' or 'can't afford making the decision' is better.
> For example, people would eat more than a sausage if the salt and fat content has reduced because they are not satisfied with these tasteless sausages.
While there are no grammatical errors, the way you phrase this part is a bit rookie. Suggested revision: 'For example, a low-fat low-salt sausage would hardly satisfy consumers, so they'd try to compensate by increasing their intake.'
> Thus, forcing food manufacturers to lower the fat, sugar and salt content in food may induce people to eat more.
You're spinning 'round too much IMO.
> young or old alike.
Suggested revision: 'young and old alike'. Reasons: it avoids a gratuitous alliteration ('or old') and emphasises the warning nature of the essay.
> children being overweight result from taking excessive junk food.
This one's not correct. Suggested revisions: '... overweight, a result from...' or '...overweight resulting from...'
> Therefore, forcing manufacturers to lower the fat, sugar and salt content in food is necessary.
Again, you're repeating yourself too much.
> When you eat a poor diet with all kinds of junk food
You don't eat a diet, you either 'eat all kinds of junk food' or 'have a poor diet with all kinds of junk food'.
> Furthermore, having unhealthy food causes premature deaths.
There's nothing wrong in 'having' unhealthy food, unless you're 'eating' it as well ;) Of course, 'having unhealthy meals' does work very well here.
513 words all in all, which is a bit too much for IELTS (you're good to go with half of it), but both grammar and fluency are sound. I'd give you a 7 band or maybe a 7.5.