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What do you think of this poem? Topic: How to write a poem format
June 17, 2019 / By Caren
Question: I want to write . To express what I think. I want you to guess. When you read what I wrote. For the right answer. That might make you wonder. Open your eyes and look between the lines. It can be very complicating. To seek for the solution.
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Amilia Amilia | 8 days ago
I think there are too many period marks. Period marks, even in poetry, should come only at the end of a sentence. It feels like you thought you needed them but didn't really understand why, so you just put them in there and hoped it was the right thing to do. You have to understand how poetry works and WHY it works before making a choice in your writing to write something in a particular way. Also, "I want you to guess when you read what I wrote for the right answer" does not make much sense in conventional english. The main problem there is that you don't need the "for the" before "the right answer". Also, you should put the "when you read what I wrote" before the "I want you to guess" to make it more grammatically correct. Also "complicating" means "Disease that occurs during or after an illness and has the same cause as the original disease or results from changes produced by the original". I believe the word you're looking for is "complicated". Not every beginning word of a line in a poem needs to be capitalized either. I would rewrite it: (this is where you should put a title, or just title it UNTITLED) I want to write, <--insert comma, not a period because it's connected to the next line to express what I think. (insert a space here because it's a change in topic, from your need to express to your need to be understood) When you read what I wrote I want you to guess, the right answer. An answer which would (clarify what the "that" is in that sentence) make you wonder. (don't use might, it's not strong enough for such a short poem) (another line break) Open your eyes and look between the lines. (this line is a bit too long to fit the format of the poem, I would break it into two parts) It can be very complicated To find the solution. ("to seek for" is not proper english, try using "to find" instead) So all put together it would look something like this: UNTITLED I want to write, to express what I think. When you read what I wrote I want you to guess, the right answer. An answer which would make you wonder. Open your eyes and look between the lines. It can be very complicated To find the solution.
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Amilia Originally Answered: Poem help: How would you feel if you received this poem from your best friend?
you're so lucky to of have found a friend like that, not many people do. love the poem it says a lot
Amilia Originally Answered: Poem help: How would you feel if you received this poem from your best friend?
Aaaaw thats cute! If I recieved that from my satisfactory buddy, it might be totally awkward given that she's a woman (so am I) but when I had been a man, I suppose I might get the factor... But ya on no account understand due to the fact that men are so dense. EDIT* oooh you do not love eachother in 'that means'. Hmm the side while it says "I'll be his detailed lady" sounds such as you wish to be his female friend. But its nonetheless lovable and I'm certain he's going to respect it :)
Amilia Originally Answered: Poem help: How would you feel if you received this poem from your best friend?
its sounds a bit like you're friends that have a crush on eachother. i have a friend like that and if HE gave that to ME i would love it so, so so so much! (i love the title by the way, because it hints of it in the poem... just brilliantly written)

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sounds cool here is another version of your poem........ I want to write to express what i feel I want your mind to wounder with fear Seek for the truth in confusion you'll be Think out of the box and the answer you'll see Read and read until u cant no more and then you'll see who i wrote this for. the answer is there don't loose focus u see i have a solution to your problem yes i do yes in deed.
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Wat Originally Answered: Awesome love poem or horrid through in the trash love poem?
Its romantic and cute :) I do love your poems :) I think you should show her its very good. I think she would like it
Wat Originally Answered: Awesome love poem or horrid through in the trash love poem?
Oh good grief yes, re- write it carefully and give it to her just the way it is,,,, ( did you mean I love thee Till the stars rain to earth, instead of rein? ) Don't change "thee" to "you", you were creating a mood with your speech, and it is perfectly loving and romantic.

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