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Ladies only. Does this sound like a good song?

Ladies only. Does this sound like a good song? Topic: How to write a good chorus for a love song
May 26, 2019 / By Cecily
Question: I wrote it today during school. I'm only 16 and I wrote this song for my g/f. So I need your opinions. Score me from 1-10, 10 being the best. [Chorus 2x] Baby I’m so glad your mine Always and forever Until the end of time Baby you are so fine [Verse 1] Baby the first day that we started to talk I could tell you were the one from the start The more that we talked, the more I loved you with my heart I’m forever yours and your forever mine I love you so much that your always on my mind Baby I love you For you I’m gonna keep it true So baby I want you to be my wife I want to cherish you with all my life I would walk 1,000 miles Just to make you smile I know that I will finally see you someday Someday you’ll be out here at the bay We could run and play So baby, just come and stay Baby this is how it seems But you are the girl of my dreams To be with you is what my only wish is I’ll do anything for one of your kisses My love for you is real And that’s the deal, deal Baby, if you ever need me Give me a call cuz I’m your sexy G’ I’ll take you to places that you’ve never seen [Chorus 2x] Baby I’m so glad your mine Always and forever Until the end of time Baby you are so fine [Verse 2] I love you baby, we belong together We were meant to be together always and forever So baby I’ll let you go never Without you, my life is just black and white And when I don’t hear your voice, I can’t sleep in the night When you start to cry, I’m there to dry up those tears Seeing you cry is my only fear So don’t worry mija, I’m always here Baby your so beautiful like a flower Everyday that passes I love you every hour Someday we’ll be at the top of a tower I could be holding you and you could be holding me Cuz baby there’s no other way that it would rather be I’m so glad that you’re the one I get to see Together we could be sitting in a tree Together we could be hand in hand And baby I know that you understand That my love for you just grows and grows I’m so glad that I’m the one you chose I know that my love for you really shows And I’m not scared that it shows Honestly baby to me, I’m not scared Because for you I’ve always cared [Chorus 2x] Baby I’m so glad your mine Always and forever Until the end of time Baby you are so fine [Verse 3] You’re the one I want to be with Your like an angel from above Baby you’re the only one I truly love The one I only think of It don’t bother me that you live far But when I look up at the stars I start to think of you I know you love me, and baby I love you to I love you no matter what I would never tell you to keep your mouth shut I’m here to listen to your every word And just like you told me, I’ll get you your love bird Your so beautiful you start to shine Baby I’m so glad your mine Every time I close my eyes I start to picture you with me This was the way it was meant to be Until the end I’m not just your man, I’m your friend You’re the one I’m always gonna defend So please mija, don’t be afraid My only fear is losing you So don’t ever tell me baby that’s its through I want it to be just us two Always and forever I’m you Boo Boo [Chorus 3x] Baby I’m so glad your mine Always and forever Until the end of time Baby you are so fine
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Annice Annice | 1 day ago
Vanity Retro Dance Freak Disco Heaven Fashion Boys Boys Boys Wonderful Let Love Down Future Love Honest Eyes (Fooled Me Again)
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Annice Originally Answered: Ladies,what do you think of this song I wrote?
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Xan Xan
I think that's pretty good. For me, I would say it's an 8. Are you going to sing this to her or anything? Try reading it over a few times and avoid using the same words over and over (i.e. baby). I think she'll love it. Good luck.
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Sheamus Sheamus
The lyrics aren't bad, but it would help alot if we knew the genre of music, chords, etc. But the lyrics get a 10/10. I would love for anybody to write me a song.
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Noah Noah
Nice song. I would drop some/most of the chorus repeats... Make sure its a "slower" song. If its up beat, it will sound really bad. so keep it mellow! Great writing though!
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Kortney Kortney
Awww. I wish somebody would write a song like that for me!!! I wanna hear it with the instruments and all that!!! 10 10 10 10 10
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Kortney Originally Answered: Does this porm/ song sound fine to you?
Nicely done, especially when considering the time you spent on this piece. I liked it as you have some nice thoughts to share with us. Interesting and hope you can do more and more better poetic pieces. Good Luck :)

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